Two In The Desert

Two – a #poem

Two intrepid
Harbingers of anticipatory cusps
Zip surreptitiously
Over torpid landscapes.
“Blah!” Shouts one.
Bliss!” The other.

~ Spontaneously composed by Stan Stewart
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Two In The Desert

2 thoughts on “Two – a #poem”

  1. Hola Stan,

    I was just online and, as usual, the procrastination faerie knocked on my door via the email notification of a new post on your blog. 🙂

    I like your poem, because it made me look up in the dictionary almost all words, so, as a language freak, I love when this happens.

    The very beautiful sunset (sunrise?) photo is a perfect companion to the poem, as it probably encloses the poem’s hidden meaning.

    Nice.

    Saludos,

    Ivette 🙂

    1. Ivette,

      Your expert response is the perfect companion to this poem. I’m so happy and grateful!

      I really appreciate what you said about the picture. I believe that the poem can stand on its own. And when I looked for a photo to compliment (or magnify?) it, I was drawn to this one. In my mind’s eye, the two are traveling in a desert.

      To say more would rob future readers of their chance to imagine their own landscape and meaning for the poem, so I’ll say no more…for now.

      Playful blessings,
      Stan

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