Just a suggestion:
Maybe just for a moment
You could smile.
Doesn’t matter if it’s
On the inside or the out.
I am simply knowing that
The lack of smiles is
Making my insides sad.
With this poem, I profess
That the rest of this day
Will be one big smile
Of love for the whole wide world –
And most especially
for you and me.
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stan stewart
muse and music for the present moment
I look for ways to re-invigorate our human experience of life. I want us to drink up every moment with enlivening spontaneity. One of the ways I do this is with improvisation -- especially improvised music. With voice, guitar, percussion, piano (keyboards) and friends, I develop "in the moment" creations. I also play classical and pop music for the vast joy it brings to know the composers and songwriters of the past and present through their music.
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Spontaneously composed, eh? Interesting. I like the poem, it’s very friendly and cheeky and you do end up with a smile on your face as you finish reading it.
Yes, it’s true. I improvise the poems.
I am enjoying that you called it cheeky. Makes me nostalgic for the UK. (I lived in Glasgow, Scotland, for 2 years and sometimes when asked for directions, still think “Yeh kkenna miss et.”)
Playful blessings,
Stan